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October 16, 2014
2:38 am

garejoran

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i hope you can help me guys… any critics and suggestions would be accepted have a nice day!!

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October 16, 2014
3:38 am

Mandrake

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Hello Randolf… welcome to our forum. Thanks for posting and we hope to see more of your work.
These photos are quite nice and each has a way of grabbing the viewer’s attention which is all important.

In the first, you missed the focus on the cat’s eyes. It’s tough, I know.
I like the idea of the second. You might try it again with the large jar framed vertical.
Love the third and haven’t seen it before. I’d try to get the bottom of the rear view mirror aligned horizontally.

Nice job with these and, again… Welcome.

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October 23, 2014
9:17 pm

easyexposure

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Welcome Randolf! We are happy to have you hear Nice set of images. I do agree on critique with Mandrake. I really like the last image. It makes me feel like I’m sitting in the car and driving through the city at night. I’m looking forward to see more of your work. Keep up the good job!