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May 15, 2013
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Please comment on this ptotos so I can improve..

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May 15, 2013
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Additional Photos
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May 16, 2013
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Nicole is very beautiful.  You are lucky to have her as a model.

I like the composition and poses that you’ve selected for her.

Perhaps a smile would be good.  Sometimes they are not.

 

Did you phase out saturation in the the first photo?

I’m not sure I like that she has two distinct flesh tones.

Reminds me a bit of Data.  I’d remove the blemish.

 

Her wardrobe in the first shot is distracting.

Simple may have worked better.

 

 

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May 16, 2013
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Interesting poses and she is a lovely model!

A little touchup in Photoshop or Lightroom would

have helped with colour and blemishes (as Mandrake

suggested). Personally, I would have tried to darken

the background in shot #3 a little as it does look quite

washed out.

These are minor suggestions and they are a nice set of pics!

Dale.

May 16, 2013
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Sir Mandrake and Sir Nikonguy you comment are very well noted and appriciated.

I’ll also upload the photos that are not edited and try to comment please…

I dont know how to use lightroom.. I hope Ms. Oksana will upload tutorial on how to use lightroom (basics)..

Do you know why Ms. Oksana do not upload videos anymore?

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May 16, 2013
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Here is the actual photo on the left.
Edited photo on the right..

Please comment…

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May 17, 2013
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Thats really good editing…which app did you use to do that??

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PicsArt.

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August 16, 2013
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For some reason I’ve happened back to this posting.
I’ve noticed another matter on which to comment.

It is the bulge in the back pocket of the model’s jeans. Perhaps it is her wallet.
I think it would be best removed before taking a photo to better display the shape of her…… body.

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August 22, 2013
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More likely a cel phone… 

 

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Maybe you are right mscharff..
I’ll will not forget this learning.. hehehe

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