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I like the second one better. Body position, facial expression, light on his face, the abstract concrete structure that give context and depth, the bokeh that blurs and embellish the otherwise ordinary and dull background. There is a sense of pride and forwardness to his expression that makes me want to hear what he has to say. Good job.

Jaydev, the second picture is really good,
Like the expression,
Agree with Dale “Akshay is a handsome young man and his father
knows how to use a camera”
Muneer.

Hi Jaydev,
I like both pictures. The first picture I like the colors. The green color is very pleasant and colorful. Good natural light. a bit of shadow on the face but that can be fix with a flash and a diffuser. If you don’t have a flash gun perhaps you could use a reflector (silver or gold, gold gives you warm feel) to bounce the natural light back at the model and diminish some the the face shadow.
Second photo, composition is good, you filled the frame well. Both photos have really good bokeh.

Love, Monkey