Mandrake said
I also think that it would be better composition if the subject was walking/facing into the scene rather than out of the scene.  

Thanks Mandrake, i agree for the composition part

easyexposure said
I think it is a great concept and I love the color tons of the image, but I slightly bothered with composition. I feel like her is too close the the edge with his foot and too much empty space above. I would frame him buy lowering my camera a bit. You could also play with the image in post by cropping the top and extending the bottom a bit.  

yes, agreed in composition part, i too felt that there is little dead space on right side.