slightly and I think that with such a lovely face and smile I would do a little more

cropping on the lower half of this picture. The arms and hands are framing her face

and I would try cropping out the right elbow and waist area. 

I'm telling you this because you obviously know how to take great photographs and 

I'm just offering an opinion to see if you agree.

The focus is wonderful right down to the highlights in the eyes.

Dale.